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Feb 8 04, 06:04
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sweet for bit ‘er
life returns to bless a saddened soul who curses someone who loves back
© Daniel J Ricketts 08 Feb 2004
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Feb 8 04, 06:23
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THE EYES DON'T HAVE "IT" !
Someone who loves back has problems with eye contact loving in the dark .....
Alan McAlpine Douglas
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Feb 8 04, 19:41
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thanks; you needed that
loving in darkness means turning the other cheek lifting up the Light
© Daniel J Ricketts 08 Feb 2004
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Feb 8 04, 21:00
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lifting up the Light shines hope for all people better pay light bill
© D R Harris - 8 February 2004
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Feb 13 04, 01:49
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How To Play
Better pay light bill by obeying all the rules; else live in darkness
© D R Harris - 12 February 2004
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Feb 13 04, 02:43
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Dear Dolly
"How To Play
Better pay light bill by obeying all the rules; else live in darkness"
My version :
How To Really Play
Better pay light bill but by breaking all the rules; else live in darkness
Wadja think ? You and me might well be chalk and cheese !
Love Alan
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Feb 13 04, 04:23
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Dear D
Part of expression "As different as chalk and cheese".
Alan
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Feb 13 04, 16:00
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In what looks mundane hides periwinkle buds beneath frozen ground.
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Feb 13 04, 18:58
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The Daily Grind
Beneath frozen grounds of coffee is much flavor, trying to get out .....
Alan McAlpine Douglas
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Feb 13 04, 19:08
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beneath frozen ground lies drunk driver’s boxed trophy of his bent elbow
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Feb 13 04, 19:17
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FESTIVE RIGHTS
Of has-been tallow there lies much about the church from festive rites.
Love Alan
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Feb 13 04, 23:40
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Rituals
from (some) festive rites we learn of people's cultures, oddities and lore
© D R Harris - 134 February 2004
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Feb 14 04, 05:26
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Very interesting haiku, Grace, dear! But, this is the INTERACTIVE HAIKU thread. If I could figure out how to move a posting, which still eludes me, I'd move this haiku over to the regular haiku thread ... :wink: :oops: But, I don't know how to.
Anyhow, I do like what this one says!
Hugs,
Dolly :butterfly:
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Feb 14 04, 05:33
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Sorry Dolly :blush21: This follows your haiku about the gnu Posted: Feb. 04 2004, 22:41
I thought it was the last page! My head is not on quite straight this morning. :speechless: I shall remove it now.
Love
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Feb 14 04, 05:33
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Believe it or Not
exaggerated fantasies abound in minds of most writing folk
© D R Harris - 14 February 2004
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Feb 14 04, 05:36
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Dear Grace and Dolly
Well now, Grace has removed the post which followed on from one on page 1, then Dolly interactives with the removed post, causing hiccoughs in all hte wrong places.
I vote Grace re-enters her haiku !
Love Alan
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Feb 14 04, 05:40
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Whoops!
Trying again to get the thread of things Dolly :blush21:
of most writing folk it can be truly said that words are their true friends
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