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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose  |
Good Morning Daniel,
 QUOTE Simply a beautiful, well-thought-through reflection, Grace -- in both senses of the word Thank you Daniel. I consider that praise indeed from an expert of form. 
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Sep 29 06, 07:43
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Hi Grace,
Where, oh where? Forever lost. stars unnamed, galaxies, constellations... searching and yearning, reaching beyond Infinity. I think you need to capitalize 'stars' in line 2 since you have an end stop in line 1. *smiles* Cathy |
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