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Mar 7 15, 02:17
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If you're screwed to the place where you dwell, without showering, soon you will smell like the spot where you stoop to let out all that poop that you're full of to think all is well.
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Mar 8 15, 02:17
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full of oneself, and all is quiet well delayed is expedition to hell you'll live some more life without trouble or strife then go quietly when you hear the bell
Alan
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Mar 8 15, 13:00
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If you're going when you hear the bell, wipe it quickly ere leaving your cell or the jailor may bark and won't tolerate snark, so behave, or you'll soon hear him yell.
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Mar 8 15, 23:23
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Stir beehives and you'll hear him yell soon when he's stung, it's a whole other tune than the one he was singing when he was branch-swinging and trying to hit a raccoon.
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Mar 9 15, 03:05
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he's trying to evade a monsoon due to hit him by round about noon but there's limited choice so you better rejoice but not if your choice is balloon
Alan
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Mar 10 15, 14:29
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Chase balloons if your knot isn't tight and you'll be out of breath, but you might put a pill in each one before you have begun so your animal stays up all night.
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Mar 10 15, 16:52
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If the animals stay up all night it is best that you stay our of sight 'til the sun licks the earth and light has a new birth so your day starts with nary a bite.
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Mar 10 15, 23:36
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If your day starts with nary a bite and you're casting with all of your might maybe you should rethink and just let the line sink underneath your boat where there's no light.
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Mar 13 15, 16:27
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'neath your boat I can't see any light -- upside down, and I'm here out of sight. I can't lift the thing off; if I die, will you scoff me as being a barnacled blight?
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Mar 16 15, 14:34
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If your barn is cold; blighted by mice I would say, "Fix it up"! in a trice for the kids like to play in the sweet smelling hay without rodents who share fleas and lice.
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Mar 17 15, 16:55
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all these rodents who share fleas and lice can be evicted in just a trice so throw shoes and socks some stones and big rocks a direct hit would be really gneiss
Alan
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Mar 17 15, 23:19
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Would real igneous hits be direct or is roll added in to affect some response from a crowd when you’re not very loud and the music you play’s circumspect.
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Mar 22 15, 12:05
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Is the music you play circumspect? Are you watching a Bris with respect? Sing a round with your kin, tossing out the foreskin; everyone stay around and reflect.
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Mar 22 15, 23:27
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Every round stay reflects on someone when D.I.'s inspect them and your gun so they both should be shiny or he'll have your hiney to kick on the ten miles you'll run.
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Mar 23 15, 16:26
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At the end of ten miles do you kick into high gear, or do muscles stick where they are, so you can't do a thing now but pant? ... and you feel you're about to be sick?
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Mar 24 15, 14:53
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When about, if you're sick you will feel that your world is beginning to reel and that pain in your gut may descend to your butt so be careful from which end you spill.
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Mar 24 15, 16:10
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So you're careful from which end you spill? Do you do it by taking some pill? or do you sit around keeping close to the ground to find holes you can easily fill?
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Mar 25 15, 13:36
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You can easily fill holes you find with the dirt someone else leaves behind but before you begin I'll tell you, "You can't win!" Holes are everywhere earthworms have dined
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Mar 27 15, 06:43
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But where earthworms dine, they always poop, so the dirt where they've been, you can scoop up to fertilize with, and it's not a myth that you'll prosper in your garden group.
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Mar 29 15, 22:32
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If you’re guarding a prosperous group when they take a sea cruise on a sloop. They’ll get drunk and act strange so you don’t know the range or what decadent depths they will stoop.
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