 faux-ku, titled haiku/senryu w/word play [ Daniel's 'creation' ] |
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 Apr 1 17, 21:13
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Hi Daniel,
Sorry about my convoluted train of thought. As Merlin says, here ‘tis: The first line was, of course, taken from your last line; the second – about a rookie priest whose associates wanted to gig him so they told him to wear blue; the third and probably the most confusing was that he eventually will “get a garb, bro (brother)” and with him complying and wearing blue, while all the other priests were in black garb, he would be left alone but with my twisted mind I wanted to throw in a “Greta Garbo” from which the title was concocted – “I want to be left alone” was Greta’s most memorable line. Hope this clears things up a bit. purr-t-gross with a snotty bite the kitten tasted its food; then came mew cussing ·······  ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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Apr 1 17, 22:05
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Thanks for your explanitaritive, Larry. Obviously I did at least get the Garbo ref! Maybe you'll be able to follow my extrusion here:
despiriting perspeculartive they were mock-a-sins quietly treading on mores; if it fits, wears you ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 2 17, 12:01
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,389 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
sin essence
if it fits, wear shoes but that will have no baring when they have old soles I enjoyed your compounded words. Some took a little more pounding than others. ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 2 17, 12:08
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
'neath destine knees
when they've sold their soles they're totally defeeted; a shoe-in for hell ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 3 17, 23:52
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,389 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
wooden fit
for hell in a shoe let vanity guide your choice; yew can’t slipper on ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 4 17, 10:52
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
shooting record
you can slip a round into your old 45; hole's in the middle ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 5 17, 19:56
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,389 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
cord of would
holes in the middle are referred to as navels; orange you glad knot’s tied ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 6 17, 05:05
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
tropic Anna
orange juice glad for the ban Anna peal? she was a fruit cake ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 6 17, 23:28
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,389 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
gut wrenching
she was a fruit cake with maraschino cherries; folks say nuts and bolt ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 8 17, 03:33
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
watch parts
folksy nuts and bolts that end up with a screw loose; can make 'em crazy ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 10 17, 18:21
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,389 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
cat astro fees
can makes them crazy when you open the catnip; scent’s cents sent sense since ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 10 17, 21:26
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
tie titan
con senses consent when he pulls the noose in scam; slip's not a slip knot ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 13 17, 13:23
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,389 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
warm cover let
nighty’s not a slip to be worn under a dress; sheets may help her out ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 14 17, 07:26
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
secret going and coming
sheets may help her route cleaning at no-tell motel; not to be spotted ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 17 17, 14:02
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,389 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
fe-lyin’
not to be spotted the leopard got them tattooed; mate thought she would dye ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 17 17, 16:48
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
mod defying
mate said to dye it; feeling well-rounded as blonde she told him, Fat chance! ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 19 17, 22:39
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,389 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
tit elation
chance told him fat shes would enjoy some attention; he got a round two ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 20 17, 05:23
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
a match struck
she came with round two after he played with the first; they both raised their arms ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 22 17, 21:15
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,389 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
keep’em crossed
they raised both their arms after sweating during mass; nun was protected ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 24 17, 16:30
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,591 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
refuzed
she came with round two displaying her prowess; lit his cigarette ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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