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Jun 4 19, 14:15
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wrappings even verse with a lot of inner rhyme; most accentual
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Jun 7 19, 10:51
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it's occidental when eyes perceive rounded rhyme; oriental slants
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Jun 10 19, 22:52
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oriental slant is prevalent in Asia; guess the eyes have it
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Jun 28 19, 06:11
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eyes are left to guess when Asians wear their maxis think it's the shy knees?
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Jul 12 19, 21:52
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think it’s the shy knees that will keep them from knocking; fright runs bowlegged
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Jul 28 19, 16:06
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knights run bowlegged from all their horsing around; Lancelot sword it!
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Aug 7 19, 22:13
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it’s Lancelot’s sword that gets him into trouble; he leaves draggin’ tracks
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Aug 19 19, 13:56
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you're draggin' leaf-tracks? you should stay out of the mulch if into guardin'
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Aug 20 19, 12:42
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if into gardens but you have had no success throw in the trowel
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Aug 20 19, 20:53
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a thrown-out towel is handy for a painter; cleans borders with strips
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Aug 24 19, 22:36
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cleans borders with strips of concrete walls and barbed wire; just play the Trump card
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Aug 30 19, 12:34
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playing the trump card catches opponent off-guard; winning in spades
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Sep 2 19, 15:08
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winning in spades means you’ve weeded the garden; they’ll come back, can you
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Sep 2 19, 17:48
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they'll come and can you if you're a good vegetable; just lie in your bed
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Sep 12 19, 10:34
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just lie in your bed but be truthful when you’re up; some things get you down
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Sep 12 19, 16:43
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something's in your down eggs have been hatching, and crabs emerge in your crotch
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Sep 19 19, 13:10
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emerge from your crouch after doing a leg thrust; it’s been way too long
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Sep 23 19, 06:07
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been on whey too long; so much time huddled inside it comes out curdled
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Oct 11 19, 14:40
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it comes out curdled when Miss Muffet milks her cows; she screams whey too much
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Oct 14 19, 07:32
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its cream's whey too much for my old hands to handle udderly confused
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