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Rhymer
post Jan 29 16, 15:36
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Reminiscing.

Happy days are few and far between,
as lately in the fallen leaves, we’ve seen
sun-cracked thwarts. No such illusions,
exist in some realms I know. When allusions
paint the meadows with colours bright,
within the arms of rhythm, at darkening night,
by our turning to marimba music, we’ll dance
in the passion of controlled panic! Perchance
we, with what clamour we can muster, will see
in burning rivulets of mist, dawn rising. Tis then we
must say farewell to the night with aching heart,
for heavy with gray crochet, it demands we part.

Rhymer. January 29th, 2016.

A new venture for me, so I hope this fulfills the requirements of this challenge?

12 Snippets in order used:
Happy days are: In the fallen leaves: Sun-cracked thwarts:: No such illusions: Some realms I: Paint the meadows with: In the arms of rhythm: Turning to marimba music: Of controlled panic: With what clamour: In burning rivulets: Heavy with gray crochet.
 
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Larry
post Jan 30 16, 17:44
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Hi Denis,

Looks like it fits all the requirements to me. You are correct in as much as it should have gone in the other string.
I did enjoy reminiscing with reading "Reminiscing" though.

Larry


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