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Alan
post Aug 20 09, 02:27
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LIGHT’S OUT

It was a wrench,
at eight bells,
to part from the wench
when she went to the powder room

to powder her nose -
what a delicious idea -
was not, I suppose
easy, in the deepest of gloom

The light bulb - and life’s -
quite transient nature
which causes much strife
is not shielded from death’s dreaded doom

Fate’s caught you off guard
altogether that night
clearly marked is your card :
“there is, sadly, no in at the womb ...”

Alan McAlpine Douglas

Challenge words : wrench eight powder nose
delicious transient bulb shield card together



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Thoth
post Aug 20 09, 15:19
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Brilliant Alan, I loved it!

The very clever play on words had me smiling throughout, especially the last line - very good indeed! I liked the novel rhyme pattern too.

Thank you for sharing you wonderful humor.

Wally


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