dream in the afternoon Options

[Guest_oskarthethird_*]

Dream In the Afternoon



Laying on a bed of late blooming
flowers and yellow straws I looked
up and studied clouds formations.
Europe, The Far East and America
were linking fluffy arms with
The Middle East as they drifted
indolently across a UN blue sky.


Then, in the undergrowth a snake
hissed, startled I got up, the breeze
had a deep chill within, clouds where
now military hostile and uniformly
grey drifting miles apart. On field
long legged sheep grazed unaware as,
always, that fall is slaughtering time.

[Aphrodite]

Dream In the Afternoon



Laying on a bed of late blooming
flowers and yellow straws I looked
up and studied clouds formations.
Europe, The Far East and America
were linking fluffy arms with
The Middle East as they drifted
indolently across a UN blue sky.


Then, in the undergrowth a snake
hissed, startled I got up, the breeze
had a deep chill within, clouds where
now military hostile and uniformly
grey drifting miles apart. On field
long legged sheep grazed unaware as,
always, that fall is slaughtering time.

Hello Oskarthethird~

I enjoyed your powerful poem and the unified connotation within.

"In dreams, there is a peaceful world."      

Very strong nuances throughout!

Blessings~
Lindi