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 May 21 11, 06:28
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 Greek  Posts: 743 Joined: 3-February 09 From: Abingdon, Oxfordshire,UK Member No.: 754 Real Name: Leonora Wyatt Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:No one at all  |
Just to Join in the fun.
Oh! Mister Camping, dear friend; We've noticed your world didn't end. A red face with egg on? And no Armageddon? All belief, we will have to suspend. I know you are feeling much limper. Your smile, just a piteous simper, 'stead of viewing The Rapture, we only could capture, a very small bang, and a whimper. ·······  ······· |
  
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May 21 11, 09:01
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,596 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
The quakes don't begin until seven,
when Camping is going to Heaven... or not... when he'll find the end's not defined by his long-kneaded dough without leaven. ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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May 21 11, 16:20
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I don't think Camping is weeping,
it's not in line with his keeping. Although there's no rapture, and no one was captured. All in all I'd rather be sleeping. Leo and Daniel, any more of these and we'll all groan our way to heaven...lol. Steve |
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