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Loglimerhyme, Larry Jennings' variant of Logarhyme w/ 332332 pulse meter |
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Nov 27 13, 10:48
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Out of the Dumps
If you're up to your butt writing verse, I don't think anything could be worse... well, unless you are dead! But keep writing a word at a time, and don't worry if lines do not rhyme; get them out of your head
onto paper, and then rearrange them until they dispel or estrange your depression; arise from your bed. Write a poem to me or to someone today you can see. You can't do otherwise!
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Dec 4 13, 00:50
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Writer's Camp
Others wiser than me say, “You can’t!” but I’ve always thought that was a rant which I often ignored because choice wasn’t given to me. Writing has become my malady; a disease I’ve adored
since my youth. I don’t care to be cured of this chronic illness. It’s endured and I hope it survives this long stint where old echoes now reign. In this forum is where I’ll remain ‘till the new crowd arrives.
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Jun 23 15, 11:03
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No new crowd has arrived. Wonder why? Are they scared or just painfully shy to reveal what they write. Our critique will be mild, watered down to the point where it won’t cause a frown; filled with rancor or spite.
There’s no pressure when we socialize because tweeting ‘round here just applies to the birds in the trees. Come and join with a friend or alone to get help with your writing. We’ll hone proses and poetries.
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Jun 23 15, 15:23
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Want your prose or your poetry honed? There's no fear that you may be dethroned; we've no royalty. We just offer a word or a tweak or take note of your pace or technique... and it's all for free.
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Jun 24 15, 13:04
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It's all free? That's too good to be true? In these forums it's all about you and the words you may post. Here the "crits" mean critiques. This applies to all help you ask for. Criticize? Not one hint or a ghost of the blatant rewrite you may find on some sites. We are all of like mind when it comes to your craft. Whether sand to a pearl or a gem that need polish; a tune to a hymn... we won't give you the shaft.
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Sep 8 15, 15:51
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From the shaft of forgotten new forms I have dredged this one up with the norms. It may still fade away but I’d like to give it one more chance though it’s strange and you may look askance it is on top today. Logarhyme it is not for I’ve changed a few metrics and thus rearranged just a few minor things. There are merely a few of them here but it’s mine and I still hold it dear; Loglimerhyme still sings.
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Sep 10 15, 03:03
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So you think your loglimerhymes sing even without traditional bling? I supposed that they do. But my time is so limited now; I've but time to show I still know how to come up with your brew.
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Sep 10 15, 18:54
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What you do with the brew at this time will not matter in this vacant clime but it brings me a smile so if your time is short, understand you will never receive reprimand and I thank you a pile.
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Sep 11 15, 10:10
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If your pile on your thanks I am pleased because this is the place we have teased whether we're all alone or if someone else joins us to write pieces here, whether serious or trite; I am not on my own.
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Sep 13 15, 15:13
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On my own, would this form now exist as a Logarhyme with a small twist that has brought a few smiles? I believe, if not for the mistakes writing one with strange metrical breaks and then you, with your wiles gave Loglimerhyme life with a name and although it will not achieve fame I just hope that it riles all the purists who turn up their nose. They may like it and then I suppose it will go in their files.
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Sep 14 15, 05:11
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Will it go in their files if they come and discover amid our ho-hum your new twist on a form? I should hope that they would and perhaps one of them will produce them in CAPS till they've become the norm!
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Sep 14 15, 21:53
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‘Till becoming the norm it remains abnormal until somebody deigns to accept this new form like the myriad variants passed which some skeptics declared “it won’t last” but it weathered the storm.
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Sep 17 15, 07:31
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If a storm has been weathered, does it become older and scarred? does it sit to recover its strength? And how is it we are the ones who could weather it? did we use guns to shoot holes in its length?
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Sep 17 15, 13:17
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It’s the length where I shot all the holes; not because of ulterior goals, although I must admit that it’s easier when writing trips than iambic pentameter quips and I think it’s a hit.
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Sep 18 15, 09:07
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If you think it's a hit we'll keep on though I should be out mowing my lawn... but the mower is down so I'll finish this last little quip even though I have run out of zip; I am too tired to clown
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Sep 19 15, 23:10
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If a clown is too tired to amuse and the small car he drives will not cruise then the show is a flop when the kids cannot laugh at his shtick and he can’t even do one small trick just take down the Big Top.
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Sep 20 15, 00:52
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If the Big Top is down the trapeze can't be seen by the stands' absentees and the lions don't roar. There's no place for the horses to whiney as they circle the grounds with that skinny young woman, Amor.
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Sep 20 15, 23:41
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That young woman is skinny no more and the horses she rode all abhor her ascending to ride on their back. One and all they’d adore to unseat her but that’s a real chore; although many have tried.
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Sep 21 15, 07:33
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Although many have tried to unseat her it's their secret desire just to cleat her and to keep her aground. But alas she climbs up on their backs and their tails often stick in their cracks since their straining abounds.
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Sep 22 15, 12:33
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Straining with leaps and bounds makes no sense when you’re riding a bull. Your defense is to keep the rope tight but I still say this sport’s for the dense who are safer when riding the fence which your head may bedight.
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