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 Assyrian  Posts: 271 Joined: 21-July 07 From: somewhere twixt 'n' tween Member No.: 456 Real Name: Sam Richmond Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:N/A  |
George hurried home for a nooner
When he was eclipsed by a lunar Missing his mark There in the dark Poor George instead faced a mooner ·······  ······· Values are to integrity as spirit to spirituality ... the one is needed that the other is sustained ~ Sam
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4rum Lunar Mooner Apr 13 10, 06:03 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Sam,
I like four of the lines very much but do... Apr 13 10, 16:43 
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I would add a beat to the last line - you c... Apr 14 10, 07:13 4rum QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Apr 14 10, 07:13 ) ... Apr 14 10, 11:22 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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