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 Nomad  Posts: 6 Joined: 7-November 15 Member No.: 5,289 Real Name: Adam Hughes Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira  |
Tonight my daughter said that the sun
was beneath the grass. She’s six and doesn’t know how things work. Tonight I laid on the couch, trying to sleep, staring at yesterday and the day before that, everything buried beneath the grass. I’m thirty-three and I don’t remember what it’s like to know where the sun goes at night. |
  
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Adhamh MacAodh Separation (II) Nov 8 15, 01:13 
weaver Greetings A!
Great to see your stuff here, I... Nov 8 15, 15:10 posthumous this feels perfect up until "buried" ...... Nov 8 15, 21:33 greenwich Very enjoyable . I like the gentle questioning i... Nov 9 15, 13:09 Eisa Hi Adam,
It's good to see you here and postin... Nov 9 15, 19:07 Luce Nicely done Adam.
I wouldn't change a thing e... Nov 12 15, 11:02 danimik Hi Adhamh
This just kinda blew me away its so tig... Nov 12 15, 18:58 Adhamh MacAodh Thank you all for taking a look at this. It's ... Nov 12 15, 22:10 
Eisa I thought I'd got the couch right and its conn... Nov 15 15, 18:43 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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