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Real Name: Daniah
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"Seize!"

"Quiet down!"

"Release me!"

My body vibrates these chants
with each passing fortnight.

Nocturnal- ceaseless- pin pricking
numbs humane reactions.

Imaginary Choruses of raging waves
ravish my days and nights.

Weakly twisting between soaked sheets,
my tears are embraced by drought.

Morning light stings swollen reddened orbs,
filtered through UV protective lenses.

Pill box flaps heavily in my pocket,
with timers buzzing each ones' turn.

"Seize!"
My shuffling feet resonate my pleas,
as each full moon rises then falls.



I know this needs a lot of work but this is my first attempt at writing for months... Hope to get your feedback.

Dani


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