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Apr 10 15, 14:44
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the emptied take-outs littered the coffee table trash came with handles
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Apr 10 15, 15:59
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trash had their handles: rattlesnake, fat boy, oyster, cigar head and butch
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Apr 11 15, 22:41
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butch heads for cigars when shopping for tobacco; I'll see him inhale
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Apr 13 15, 07:29
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exhale icy hymns in the cold sanctuary; see breath rise to heav'n
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Apr 13 15, 14:02
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heaving sea-breaths rise above the gale in short prayers for waves from the shore
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Apr 14 15, 08:52
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waves on the shore bid the summer Goodbye; the ship sails away
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Apr 14 15, 13:44
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the sale slips away before you get to the store and you miss the boat
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Apr 15 15, 18:07
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they have missed the boat with the cannon they deployed; shipping now would boom
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Apr 15 15, 23:45
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shaping new wood brooms the factory worker pined for the longest straw
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Apr 16 15, 15:20
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it was the last straw: employee again forgot to fill container
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Apr 17 15, 14:30
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tofu container was never opened again after the first bite
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Apr 21 15, 00:20
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after the first bite the dog left him alone; his paw was bleeding
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Apr 21 15, 13:06
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his bleeding was paused by aortal tourniquet but it was in vein
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Apr 22 15, 11:54
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only in vein the phlebotomist tried; no bloody way!
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Apr 22 15, 22:57
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nobody weighed meat from the butcher shop everyone bought thumb
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Apr 24 15, 02:10
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everyone bought thome; they thay they think it helpth them thpeak without a lithp
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Apr 24 15, 15:02
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to speak without lips is a ventriloquist's trick Adam's apples bob
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Apr 26 15, 11:55
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Adam bobs apples to show off his big mouth; he doesn't need to
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Apr 26 15, 17:12
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he kneads his dough to make his famous apple pies, golden delicious
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Apr 27 15, 00:41
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golden delicious a complete oxymoron yellow insipids
Alan
PS, Larry, Daniel, Lori, sorry I have been "away", had lots of attention on our upcoming election (7 May), and just to add complexity, had a mild stroke, which mainly jumbled my words, well on the way back to better, tho !
Several words here needed re-typing.
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