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 Mar 25 13, 08:26
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 1,547 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Jeddah, Saudi Arabia Member No.: 13 Real Name: Daniah Writer of: Poetry  |
What is age
but a numerical extension of our time above ground. A countdown that begins embryonically; mileage pre-calculated defining you. Choice? A fabrication; mirage, within the bars of life's rule book. We're but a feeble light cast-off into nothingness, set to fade in a vast night. ·······  ·······Happiness is a journey, not a destination.
"A good book is not read and forgotten. It lingers in the mind of the reader, reshaping thoughts, asking new questions, revisiting ancient ones." MM Award Winner     |
  
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Mar 26 13, 19:13
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 1,547 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Jeddah, Saudi Arabia Member No.: 13 Real Name: Daniah Writer of: Poetry |
Dear Daniel,
Thanks for coming back and pls don't fret over anything you share here. I love your input. ······· ·······Happiness is a journey, not a destination.
"A good book is not read and forgotten. It lingers in the mind of the reader, reshaping thoughts, asking new questions, revisiting ancient ones." MM Award Winner |
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Siren Blink Mar 25 13, 08:26 
Alan Dear Dani,
Very well put, though If I may, I disa... Mar 25 13, 09:20 Siren Hey Alan,
Thanks for dropping in. I was consider... Mar 25 13, 10:30 JustDaniel Dear Dani...
Though I don't believe you'r... Mar 25 13, 10:48 Siren Dear Daniel,
Today's bombings in Damascus we ... Mar 25 13, 19:09 JustDaniel Dear Dani...
I had remembered that you had visite... Mar 25 13, 19:29 Larry Hi Dani,
It is so nice to see you back again, eve... Mar 26 13, 11:34 Siren Hey Larry,
It's good to move in slowly. Tryin... Mar 26 13, 19:15 Eisa Hi Dani!
How great to see you posting here a... Mar 30 13, 19:42 Siren Dear Eira,
It's wonderful to be I contact and... Mar 31 13, 02:52 Eisa Looking forward to your next poem, Dani.
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Sno... Apr 2 13, 15:45 Maggie Hi Dani,
Your poem is sadly beautiful to me. I a... Apr 6 13, 11:52 Cleo_Serapis Why hello Dani!
It's so nice to see you ... Apr 6 13, 19:32 Psyche Dear Dani,
At last I'm able to read and comme... Apr 27 13, 00:53 Siren Dear Sylvia,
It makes me proud to me in the midst... Apr 28 13, 06:08 Siren Hi Peggy,
You have likened the sense of this poem... Apr 28 13, 06:14 
Maureen G'day Dani - it's great to know you have g... Apr 30 13, 23:55 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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