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May 27 16, 05:17
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WONDERFUL YODELNESS
way
out to
Neverland
don't ever phone
ear-shock yodel;
rue all the antiphon;
forego all of the big hype
unless you like to sing the blues;
let it all hang out with siren tones
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May 27 16, 22:13
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tune piano - seek notes
tones
unglue,
negate dirge
effects and lack
pathos of refrain
inducing harsh echo
and spoil the wake’s temperament
needed to maintain mourners nature
over the passing of their loved ones.
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Jun 1 16, 05:29
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once I give in to your acrostic needs it starts to drive me more crazy than I am; it's already hard enough just creating something making reasonable sense in nine straight lines
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Jun 2 16, 13:41
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laughter’s sweetness
lines
allow
us to use
gaudy language
helping to effect
tight lips into a grin,
enhancing ones appearance
rather than frowns that cause wrinkles
so use lines which make smiling faces
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Jun 2 16, 21:32
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poo* well-mixed with mown grass and garden waste will enhance plant growth increasing your crop's size making more money in bank so you can till and plant more ground and put still more money in your till
*feces mistakenly in original
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Jun 4 16, 07:39
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‘till changing most of the parameters of writing Nonets and pronouncing feces I will have to insist that you must rectify your typo so other readers won’t poo-poo it.
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Jun 9 16, 19:49
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it reddens my visage that such mistakes come to your purview so thanks for suggesting that I make the correction which I have just now extruded on the top of the previous page.
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Jun 13 16, 14:28
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page after preceding pages of wit are bound to include some mistakes on the way despite all of our efforts but occasionally you’ll find through perseverance we write a gem
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Jun 14 16, 04:44
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gems glisten in darkness if someone comes and opens the page to let in outside light but it also will reveal a plethora of piled coal ready for someone to strike a match
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Jun 14 16, 22:02
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match that lights anthracite or ligneous must be very hot or you’ll burn your fingers before it starts to warm up so use pressure as well as heat and you’ll squeeze out a diamond or two
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Jun 15 16, 20:46
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two plus two makes fifty at least for some; for Eileen and me it becomes forty-nine years we'll be married Friday and it seems quite impossible that we've been together for so long
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Jun 15 16, 22:07
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long ago I felt like marriage was bunk but I met my wife after two divorces and we just celebrated twenty-five years on Saturday. Congratulations on forty-nine!
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Jun 16 16, 14:38
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nein! congrats to you two for twenty-five very special years; I'm sure you will share more and that you will write about some of your blessings and lessons that you've learned along the Lighted way
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Jun 17 16, 14:22
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waiting on the nicest
wait and much inner peace touches you when incessant ennui nudges a heart’s attic, grown dusty, and lets you see over bias and broken dreams new love can arrive and it’s the best
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Jun 21 16, 00:55
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best not try acrostics with limited time available; had to cut this one off in the middle of line six for dinner two days ago and worked all day today at our 'farm'
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Jun 22 16, 11:06
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flowering my new home
farm: let’s try our new corn which grows in line, enticing a few rural new farmers with intriguing scenario; nutrition and beauty that’s from growing flowers between rows. That’s nice.
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Jun 26 16, 13:52
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nice to see acrostics though frustrating 'cause I haven't time to plan one out myself that would have any meaning thus I'm content to just blather and fill up the space with nothing
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Jun 27 16, 22:32
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Things fingers get calloused from using them to walk around floors when it’s going somewhere so fingerprints have worn off making all the tips slippery so it wears a glove from lacrosse-stick.
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Jun 28 16, 01:43
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it's a wrap
stick fingers in your ears if your don't like that rapper music; however that won't stop your body from vibrating since the bass is turned up so high that all your pictures fall off the wall
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Jun 29 16, 10:13
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BOOM!
wall between the neighbors used to rattle with that rap music when in an apartment until my speakers were placed facing against that partition and played the Eighteen Twelve overture.
True story!
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