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Apr 9 12, 08:08
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work
requires
focus-time
but don't forget
fun
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Apr 9 12, 09:57
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Hot Summers contravene, like tails wagging dogs.
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Apr 9 12, 10:20
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thwart
the heat
with a fan;
see the dog's tail
wag
© MLee Dickens'son 2012
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Apr 10 12, 02:01
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By way of acknowledging Will.I.Am of the Hot Chilli Pepper's creative use of his forename : Dan. I.El lights lanturnes at drop of hat bright
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Apr 10 12, 11:44
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hats
cover
ideas
that need the light
share
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Apr 10 12, 13:42
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Share old words with others, rearranged by thoughts.
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Apr 10 12, 13:48
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thoughts through mind mined meanings leanings revealed mind !
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Apr 10 12, 13:56
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Mind and heart understand what lips never say.
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Apr 10 12, 14:01
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TRUTH
say what's dared/ what is true/ gotten away with
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Apr 10 12, 14:14
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Just a reminder, from the opening page of this thread, re 'lanturne':QUOTE Generally, each line is a self-contained statement, such that the poem is not merely a sentence arbitrarily divided into syllables. Some suggest that the form should begin with a noun, with line 2 giving an action or description of the noun and lines 3 & 4 each giving a further description, and the 5th line offering another word for the noun, though not necessarily a synonym or even a noun. The form may or may not have a title, but it can be an integral part as the ‘sixth line’ of the poem. snuffed lanturne
bard
hanging
strung out words
a death sentence
choked
© MLee Dickens'son 2012
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Apr 16 12, 16:29
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choked strong words emotions hung out to dry iced
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Apr 16 12, 22:52
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brood
ice-teased
with steeped words
the poet's thoughts
pour
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Apr 17 12, 08:51
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pores exhude cool bodies waist removal sweat
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Apr 17 12, 15:46
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sweat can pour from forehead concentration 'spired
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Apr 18 12, 08:41
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spires reach up touching hearts iconic aim point
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Apr 18 12, 10:32
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point at sky fluffy clouds followed by rain see ?
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Apr 18 12, 13:39
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sea
whispers
good morning
announcing hi
tide
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Apr 19 12, 03:08
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tied fessled imprisoned done up in knots dyed
or
tried in car serrated metal prison cell
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Apr 19 12, 13:54
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Sell your lure telephone applications cost
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dyed in wool sheep's clothing do not fit wolf's bane
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Apr 19 12, 14:21
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bay a moon optimism with girl on arm wolf
Alan
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