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Nov 12 14, 11:06
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If you're telling the truth "through your nose" you will sound like Bob Dylan! Who knows? You could sell all your tunes to raisins and prunes like me... and your bottom line grows!
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Nov 14 14, 00:29
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Bottoms grow if you're lying like me about diets that work, you will see that all food groups on earth merely add to the girth of your posterior's panoply.
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Nov 14 14, 01:28
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If your backside will pan every plea for your cutting back, as you can see it will keep pushing out; I agree, without doubt, before long you'll be looking like me!
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Nov 14 14, 17:18
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If you like me, before long you'll look at me as a familiar old book but as time passes by I'll become dim of eye, wrinkled, gray with a nose like a hook.
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Nov 15 14, 05:27
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With that grey, wrinkled hook of a nose you can still breathe while finding repose in your yard or in bed; would you rather, in stead lie in permanent, comatose doze?
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Nov 16 14, 14:50
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Is a comatose daze permanent or do you still have time to repent of the dreams which arise before you feed the flies? Have you lived a long life that's well spent?
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Nov 16 14, 21:01
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Have you spent a long life doing naught storing up everything that you bought with the money you earned? Will you never have learned that your death leaves behind the whole lot?
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Nov 17 14, 01:48
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Lots for death leave behinds in a hole even those who are not on the dole so cremation's the way to avoid all that pay; lay in state in a nice covered bowl.
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Nov 17 14, 15:23
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If you're lying inside of a bowl pray the bathroom is not where your soul will be flushed to its end to flow way 'round the bend to the sewer, your ultimate goal.
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Nov 17 14, 18:55
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To a sewer the ultimate goal is to take simple cloth from a roll and create with some style a new garment worthwhile which the wearer is bound to extoll
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Nov 21 14, 14:42
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Our ex-toll-roads go weaving along through the forests and mountains; a song will be sung 'cause it's free to drive there with no fee or toll-takers to make it feel wrong.
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Nov 24 14, 11:35
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To make takers feel wrong is a toll on the givers whose models are role so it's my Christmas wish that they get a dead fish in their stocking with one lump of coal.
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Nov 26 14, 04:09
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If your stocking is lumpy with fish you could use it to make a great dish for his Thanksgiving meal; it could be a great great deal to let Santa eat something you wish.
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Nov 26 14, 15:11
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To let Santa wash something to eat is not something you want to repeat for he has enough work and he'll think you're a jerk; so your stockings are filled by your feet.
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Nov 28 14, 01:52
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If your foot doesn't fill out your stocking is it incomprehensibly shocking? What you hang on your mantle must be more than ample for the presents you will be unlocking!
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Nov 28 14, 14:41
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If your present is one that unlocks then it probably won't fit in a box or go under the tree. Can you get one for me because I'm tired of neckties and socks?
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Nov 29 14, 03:23
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So, of neckties and socks you are tired? Tell your clothier and cobbler they're fired; go around naked-foot and in your birthday suit. Be the nature-boy 'til you have sired.
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Dec 3 14, 14:38
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A boy sired out in nature may be from the sixties when loving was free but his head is now grey and he'd much rather lay by the fireplace with cold wine and brie
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Dec 4 14, 07:17
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at cold fireplace he whines, what will be... but if he would just rise to his knee and Kindle the wood his Amazon could give him something to read; try and see
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Dec 5 14, 16:02
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Give a try and read something to him. Go ahead; pick a book on a whim. Sit on his little bed until that sleepy head starts to dream and his thoughts learn to swim.
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