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JustDaniel
post Feb 3 05, 06:55
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Voice in the Dark

I’m feeling He’s abandoned me;
a spiral down won’t set me free...
I need to cling,
remembering, when I’ve no sight,
the things He’s shown me in the light...
in darkness, sing.

“How can you sing!” a voice may blare.
“It’s obvious He doesn’t care;
just face the facts.”
Amid the drone of dark despair,
a still, small Voice is always there;
on this I act.

God is near the broken-hearted,
hears before a prayer is started...
been there too...
near the one whose spirit’s crushed;
“I’ll never leave you.”  List now… hushed...
He cries with you.

© Daniel J Ricketts 03 Feb 2005
Psalm 34:18


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- JustDaniel   Voice in the Dark   Feb 3 05, 06:55
- -   Dear Daniel, Thank you, this is very beautiful. ...   Feb 3 05, 07:11
- - JLY   Daniel, This is an uplifting piece.  The foll...   Feb 3 05, 11:07
- - Don   Hi Just Daniel, A nice piece, which reminded me o...   Feb 3 05, 11:47
- - Cybele   Hello Daniel, You have me foxed. What is a loga...   Feb 4 05, 05:08
- - jgdittier   Dear Just Daniel, I suppose for most poets mastery...   Feb 4 05, 08:24
- - Siren   Hello Daniel, Because I can relate to this, it ha...   Feb 4 05, 16:54
- - heartsong7   Hi Daniel...This delivers a fine message to fit th...   Feb 5 05, 11:18
- - Perrorist   Hi, Daniel I'm not a spiritual person but I e...   Feb 5 05, 11:34
- - Athena   QUOTE(Just Daniel @ Feb. 03 2005, 04:55)Hi Da...   Feb 7 05, 01:50
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Daniel. A piece that really sends a heartfelt...   Feb 7 05, 06:28
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE(Alan @ Feb. 03 2005, 07:11)Thank you, t...   Feb 7 05, 16:40
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE(JLY @ Feb. 03 2005, 11:07)Daniel, This ...   Feb 7 05, 17:15
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE(Don @ Feb. 03 2005, 11:47)A nice piece,...   Feb 7 05, 17:24
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE(Cybele @ Feb. 04 2005, 05:08)You have m...   Feb 7 05, 17:40
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE(jgdittier @ Feb. 04 2005, 08:24)Dear Ju...   Feb 7 05, 17:51
- - Cybele   Hi Daniel, [ I'm trying to 'admonish...   Feb 7 05, 17:57
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE(Siren @ Feb. 04 2005, 16:54)Because I c...   Feb 7 05, 18:00
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE(heartsong7 @ Feb. 05 2005, 11:18)This d...   Feb 7 05, 18:11
- - Don   QUOTE(Just Daniel @ Feb. 07 2005, 17:24)QUOTE...   Feb 7 05, 20:00

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