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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 19,923 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
Voice in the Dark
I’m feeling He’s abandoned me; a spiral down won’t set me free... I need to cling, remembering, when I’ve no sight, the things He’s shown me in the light... in darkness, sing. “How can you sing!” a voice may blare. “It’s obvious He doesn’t care; just face the facts.” Amid the drone of dark despair, a still, small Voice is always there; on this I act. God is near the broken-hearted, hears before a prayer is started... been there too... near the one whose spirit’s crushed; “I’ll never leave you.” List now… hushed... He cries with you. © Daniel J Ricketts 03 Feb 2005 Psalm 34:18 ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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JustDaniel Voice in the Dark Feb 3 05, 06:55 
Dear Daniel,
Thank you, this is very beautiful.
... Feb 3 05, 07:11 JLY Daniel,
This is an uplifting piece. The foll... Feb 3 05, 11:07 Don Hi Just Daniel,
A nice piece, which reminded me o... Feb 3 05, 11:47 Cybele Hello Daniel,
You have me foxed. What is a loga... Feb 4 05, 05:08 jgdittier Dear Just Daniel,
I suppose for most poets mastery... Feb 4 05, 08:24 Siren Hello Daniel,
Because I can relate to this, it ha... Feb 4 05, 16:54 heartsong7 Hi Daniel...This delivers a fine message to fit th... Feb 5 05, 11:18 Perrorist Hi, Daniel
I'm not a spiritual person but I e... Feb 5 05, 11:34 Athena QUOTE(Just Daniel @ Feb. 03 2005, 04:55)Hi Da... Feb 7 05, 01:50 Cleo_Serapis Hi Daniel.
A piece that really sends a heartfelt... Feb 7 05, 06:28 JustDaniel QUOTE(Alan @ Feb. 03 2005, 07:11)Thank you, t... Feb 7 05, 16:40 JustDaniel QUOTE(JLY @ Feb. 03 2005, 11:07)Daniel,
This ... Feb 7 05, 17:15 JustDaniel QUOTE(Don @ Feb. 03 2005, 11:47)A nice piece,... Feb 7 05, 17:24 JustDaniel QUOTE(Cybele @ Feb. 04 2005, 05:08)You have m... Feb 7 05, 17:40 JustDaniel QUOTE(jgdittier @ Feb. 04 2005, 08:24)Dear Ju... Feb 7 05, 17:51 Cybele Hi Daniel,
[ I'm trying to 'admonish... Feb 7 05, 17:57 JustDaniel QUOTE(Siren @ Feb. 04 2005, 16:54)Because I c... Feb 7 05, 18:00 JustDaniel QUOTE(heartsong7 @ Feb. 05 2005, 11:18)This d... Feb 7 05, 18:11 
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