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DEATH AND THE HERMITAGE

 I hated him. His very presence was offensive to me, so when I knew Death would come for him, I did not tell him.
 Ask me not how I knew, for it seemed as in a dream; I knew, but had no recollection of discovering. It was as though I had always known. I was expecting it, and could hardly keep calm while I talked with him, and called him "brother."
 Every word the sallow face spoke, every bob of the white-wooled head, brought with it a joy of knowing I would soon never have to see that head or hear that cringing voice again.
 At mealtime, in the Great Hall, I kept watching him — sharp-eyed as a child — watching for the faintest sigh of poison or of illness. He laughed and joked with the rest, and sat soberly as stone when the Master entered; and in all, survived.
 My secret knowledge was nearly driving me mad, by now; for I knew beyond a shadow of suspicion that he ought to have been dead, now day was so far spent. I wandered the corridors of the hermitage until late in the night, my candle the only gleam or sign of vigil. Then, as I rounded a corner, I saw a huge, black-robed figure duck into a doorway. The cowl was empty, and the whole robe was filled with nought but shadow. There was a silver gleam I knew to be a sickle-blade at his side.
 His chamber was fatefully two doors from where I stood frozen. I turned toward it, and then glanced back over my shoulder. Near Death's chamber stood now a grotesque of a bull: huge, tawny-black, head lowered before disproportionately immense shoulders. It looked at me with a gaze so terrible and expectant that I turned away.
 "Brother, brother!" I called, pounding his oaken door.
 "Brother!" again.
 The door opened, and, suddenly speechless, I realized I was about to kill this man I called "brother;" the man I slyly named "friend." Somehow, hoarse-voiced, nearly dumb, I directed him to the chamber down the hall. He could not see the Death-bull. Somehow, I knew before I ever roused him that only I could see it. As he entered the room, the bull snorted once, stomped a hoof, and followed him inside.
 I heard a shuffle, a cut-off cry, and then silence. Cautiously, I walked to the door, and entered.
 There, lying gored on the stone before me, lay this man, the man I most despised. His blood flowed gently, freely from his chest, and I watched it. I was now the only one left to despise; I was the hateful.
 Now consumed with sorrow, I looked up, and was filled instead with terror. I backed up, trying to leave by the door; but there was no longer a door. In fright, I spun around, but faced only a wall.
 Sobbing, I sunk down. I heard a snort, and the stomping of a hoof. Looking back, I saw the bull trotting slowly toward me.
 
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- sehrgut   Death and the Hermitage   Jul 20 04, 21:46
- - Cailean   Very evocative and dark, I was reminded very much ...   Jul 23 04, 08:48
- - sehrgut   Cailean-  Thanks for the feedback! Hmm...   Jul 23 04, 09:34
- - Cailean   Two of my favourite stories are "The Thing on the ...   Jul 26 04, 08:33
- - sehrgut   Cailean—  Thanks for the leads. I wil...   Jul 26 04, 23:48
- - Pandora   Captivating story! I like the colonial feel of...   Jul 27 04, 21:24
- - sehrgut   Laura—  Sorry for the late response ....   Aug 9 04, 00:11
- - Zeus˛   Keith, or as they say, Evil begets Evil. Like the ...   Aug 9 04, 06:15

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