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 Babylonian  Posts: 102 Joined: 22-June 17 From: Arizona, USA Member No.: 5,325 Real Name: Ali Zonak Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:none  |
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Number of downloads: 3Attempting a Portrait Your hair is soft. Gossamer would feel coarse against my cheeks. Your locks, splendidly fine, would throw fair Venus into fits of jealousy By daylight, when you are awake, I must attempt to paint your portrait in oil, but I know that once again my skills shall fail me. Do I render this flower in radiant colors to achieve such lovely bloom? Still, I should have failed to do you justice. Paint those parting lips? Ah! I must touch them and look into your eyes— eyes that enhance your features, like the stars that serve to beautify heaven. But you are asleep. ·······  ·······~~~~
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Ali zonak Attempting a Portrait Aug 9 17, 19:35 
Eisa Hi Ali,
I am presuming that you painted the beaut... Aug 11 17, 14:04 
Ali zonak QUOTE (Eisa @ Aug 11 17, 15:04 ) Hi Ali,
... Aug 11 17, 14:31 Psyche Hi Ali,
I've come over for a visit after a lon... Oct 1 17, 02:22 Ali zonak QUOTE (Psyche @ Oct 1 17, 03:22 )
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