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ohsteve Haiku Jan 9 09, 13:02
prerna bala oh , you are talking of the other hemisphere. But ... Jan 13 09, 06:44 ohsteve Prerna, i was imaging toward how flowers break thr... Jan 13 09, 14:08 prerna bala the aha moment dawns on me; "AHA! so that... Jan 14 09, 12:20 Larry Hi Steve, I agree with your statement that if it ... Jan 14 09, 13:21 ohsteve Larry, thanks for stopping by to read, I debated o... Jan 14 09, 21:34 Larry Hi Steve, Nice revision but I have a new nit - yo... Jan 15 09, 00:54 Cleo_Serapis Hi Steve, Nice change with that elipse in L1. I e... Jan 15 09, 06:45 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Steve, This is beautiful IMHO! I am a ... Jan 17 09, 08:58 ohsteve I have revised a second time, I notice that I forg... Jan 17 09, 10:20 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Steve, I see a couple nits in revision 2. 2... Jan 17 09, 11:28 Cleo_Serapis Hi Steve, Back again: I awake...equate lilies gr... Jan 17 09, 14:59 prerna bala i like the fact that the flowers are lilies, i can... Jan 18 09, 14:09 ohsteve I have revised again, but have tracked back to the... Jan 19 09, 16:41 Larry Hi again Steve, QUOTE 3rd Revison I awake...equa... Jan 26 09, 13:50 ohsteve Larry, thanks for the horticultural lesson, I don... Jan 28 09, 10:55 Larry Hi Steve, Much better, and thanks to your choice ... Jan 28 09, 13:53 prerna bala nice, steve; nice haiku Jan 29 09, 15:48 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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