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 Jun 14 07, 20:01
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 Babylonian  Posts: 88 Joined: 7-March 07 From: United States Member No.: 409 Real Name: Brenda Nixon Cook Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Sampo  |
The Plight of the Mockingbird
sing-song sang mockingbird I long for my own song not one borrowed from another song-sing ·······  ·······MM Award Winner
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Jun 15 07, 19:21
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 376 Joined: 28-May 07 From: Co. Galway, Ireland Member No.: 440 Real Name: Terry O C Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Ephiny |
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sang (a)mockingbird Maybe insert "a" I long for my own song not one borrowed from another song-sing Hi Brenda, Its kinda sad this one isn't it? No real crit for you here, but I hate seeing an empty reply box and its the second time I've read it, so I felt I should say something. Terry ······· ·······Terry
light lights light --Raymond Rosliep "The imagination imitates. It is the critical spirit that creates." --Oscar Wilde MM Award Winner     |
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Jun 16 07, 08:41
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Babylonian Posts: 88 Joined: 7-March 07 From: United States Member No.: 409 Real Name: Brenda Nixon Cook Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Sampo |
Hi Terry,
Yes sad for the mockingbird..perhaps...just a thought I had. Thank you for my filling my empty box...it is greatly appreciated...can't add the "a" then my count would be off. I almost never write any kind of formed verse. I suck at it. Drive myself crazy with counts and meter, and stresses....makes me insane...For some reason though I like cinquains...so I try on occassion.... thank you for the read and the reply box deposit. I will return the favor. :) brenda QUOTE (Terocon101 @ Jun 15 07, 19:21 )  sing-song
sang (a)mockingbird Maybe insert "a" I long for my own song not one borrowed from another song-sing Hi Brenda, Its kinda sad this one isn't it? No real crit for you here, but I hate seeing an empty reply box and its the second time I've read it, so I felt I should say something. Terry ······· ·······MM Award Winner
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Jun 16 07, 11:24
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 376 Joined: 28-May 07 From: Co. Galway, Ireland Member No.: 440 Real Name: Terry O C Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Ephiny |
Yes sad for the mockingbird..perhaps...just a thought I had. Thank you for my filling my empty box...it is greatly appreciated...can't add the "a" then my count would be off. I almost never write any kind of formed verse. I suck at it. Drive myself crazy with counts and meter, and stresses....makes me insane...For some reason though I like cinquains...so I try on occassion....
Hey Brenda, LOL, I know how you feel about writing in form, it can wreck the head. Umm, so theres a word count in this cinquain, sorry I was oblivious. Where can I find the rules of this form?? Terry ······· ·······Terry
light lights light --Raymond Rosliep "The imagination imitates. It is the critical spirit that creates." --Oscar Wilde MM Award Winner |
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bbnixon The Plight of the Mockingbird Jun 14 07, 20:01 
bbnixon Terry,
Lots of variation...formal and more inform... Jun 16 07, 12:05 
Terocon101 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cinquain
Thanks Bren... Jun 16 07, 14:49 Cleo_Serapis Hi Bebe.
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