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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 883 Joined: 2-January 06 From: Washington State USA Member No.: 145 Writer of: Poetry  |
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Dec 28 06, 13:17
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 883 Joined: 2-January 06 From: Washington State USA Member No.: 145 Writer of: Poetry |
I think you are reading the original. The line with wonder had been dropped. The revised version is at the top of the page. Thanks for reading though
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Dec 28 06, 18:29
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry |
QUOTE (Cyn @ Dec 28 06, 18:17 ) [snapback]89179[/snapback] I think you are reading the original. The line with wonder had been dropped. The revised version is at the top of the page. Thanks for reading though Hey Cyn, Whoops! I apologize as I was stuck on the original's last sentence. The revised has a great "punch!" Happy holidays. ······· ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Cyn removed Dec 19 06, 21:04 
JustDaniel What a graphically grim picture, Cyn. The flow of... Dec 20 06, 10:49 
Cyn QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Dec 20 06, 15:49 ) 88... Dec 20 06, 12:56 Cyn I have revised this one as well Dec 27 06, 20:36 AMETHYST WOW... Cyn, this is forceful, with harsh reality a... Dec 27 06, 21:57 Cyn Liz I have altered this per your suggestion, thank... Dec 28 06, 01:41 Aphrodite Hi Cyn,
This is a rousing poem and your raw/slang... Dec 28 06, 09:40 Cleo_Serapis Hi Cyn.
Sorry I'm so late to read and comment!
... Jan 21 07, 19:24 Cyn Thanks Cleo. I hope the main gist of this was not ... Jan 23 07, 18:18 Cleo_Serapis Yes - there is connection to that, in the closing ... Jan 25 07, 18:11 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Cyn on your Member Choice award winning t... Feb 24 07, 13:30 Cyn WOW
I did not know it had been nominated! Than... Feb 24 07, 15:13 Cleo_Serapis Hi Cyn.
A well deserved award!
We're trying a... Feb 25 07, 09:02 Cathy Congratulations on your Member Choice and IBPC Nom... Feb 25 07, 09:07 AMETHYST Congratuations Cyn, This is a striking poem and we... Feb 26 07, 16:45 azurepoetry Cyn,
Yes, deserving praise, to a deserving poetes... Feb 26 07, 18:12 Eisa Congratulations
Well deserved!
Snow Feb 27 07, 05:37 Arnfinn Congratulations.
A feather in your cap
Bes... Feb 27 07, 05:49 Orion Wow!
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