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post Oct 21 06, 09:21
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Vexing Moon

The spirits vex on Hallows Eve,
when veils are thin above the dead,
a harvest rich, makes them not leave,
their treats are bitter dark from dread.

Translucent movement in the night
a scary howling full of shrills,
green witches stew, brews soup of fright,
as goblins dance a dance of chills.

Parades through lanes search long for sweets,
afraid to see a ghostly form,
and bars of plenty; gooey treats
tempt hungry kids into haunt’s storm.
©Linda Balboni 2004[/center]


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post Oct 23 06, 16:32
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Dear Linda,
Here is the most imaginative posting I've read all day. That makes it also most entertaining.
The poem
The action scene
The title
Orange ink
Timeliness

I'll now have to post something timely too.
Cheers and Happy Halloween!
Ron jgd


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post Oct 26 06, 16:27
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QUOTE (jgdittier @ Oct 23 06, 21:32 ) *
Dear Linda,
Here is the most imaginative posting I've read all day. That makes it also most entertaining.
The poem
The action scene
The title
Orange ink
Timeliness

I'll now have to post something timely too.
Cheers and Happy Halloween!
Ron jgd


Hello Ron~

How are you this fine evening? Thanks for the creative response and your kind words.

Glad you enjoyed!

Happy Halloween, pumpkin.gif

Lindi


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