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post Aug 25 05, 01:33
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When Cathy posted her poem "Relentless Power" it reminded me of one of the early poems I attempted to write. Having mentioned it to her in her thread, I thought I would post it on MM. I have had it critted on another board and for historical reasons I don't really want to revise it further.

I would, however, appreciate your comments.

Words

Do you know the effect,
Of words thoughtless spoken?
So terribly powerful,
Are the emotions awoken.

What is said can inspire me,
To reach so much higher,
Or kill creativity,
Like water on fire.

Words wrap around me,
So I’m never alone,
Or hurt like a knife,
Cutting sharp to the bone.

See the laughter, the joy,
The anger, the tears,
All churning inside me,
Exposing my fears.

Words wash over me,
Like waves on the beach,
The ripples created,
How far will they reach?

So speak your truth quietly,
With wisdom and care,
Of others’ sensitivities,
Be always aware.


Nina
 
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Guest_Nina_*
post Jun 27 06, 16:52
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Hi Ivor


Yes, words are very powerful and can do a lot of damage.

Thanks for taking the time to read this.

Nina
 
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- Nina   Words   Aug 25 05, 01:33
- - Toumai   Hi, Nina Thanks for this. I particularly like t...   Aug 25 05, 02:22
- - Nina   Hi Fran Thanks for popping in to read this and co...   Aug 25 05, 02:43
- - Jox   Hi Nina, Yes, I do remember this from last year o...   Aug 25 05, 03:44
- - jgdittier   Dear Nina, You've written a poem entitled "Wor...   Aug 25 05, 08:12
- - Nina   Hi J Yes, I do remember this from last year on BB...   Aug 25 05, 09:36
- - Nina   Hi Ron You've written a poem entitled "Words"...   Aug 25 05, 12:19
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hello Nina. Sorry I missed this piece when you f...   Sep 11 05, 09:06
- - Nina   Hi Lori I'm pleased you found this eventually...   Sep 11 05, 09:23
- - Aphrodite   QUOTE (Nina @ Aug. 25 2005, 02:33)When Cathy ...   Sep 11 05, 17:34
- - Nina   Hi Lindi Thanks for reading this and commenting. ...   Sep 12 05, 00:50
- - Maxim   Hi Nina This is a most poignant poem and the poin...   Sep 23 05, 11:46
- - Nina   Hi Maxim thanks for your comments.  I had...   Sep 23 05, 16:52
- - Maxim   QUOTE (Nina @ Sep. 23 2005, 22:52)Hi Maxim t...   Sep 23 05, 18:53
- - Nina   Hi MaXim I know very well the actual saying which...   Sep 24 05, 00:21
- - Cathy   Hi Nina, I don't usually venture into this fo...   Sep 26 05, 14:23
- - Nina   Hi Cathy I'm really pleased you came in here ...   Sep 26 05, 16:25
- - jgdittier   Dear Nina, This one hit the bullseye! Cheers, ...   Oct 28 05, 17:02
- - Nina   Hi Ron I'm glad this hit its mark. thank...   Oct 28 05, 17:17
- - Nefertiti   HUH!  The computer just ate my post, Nina...   Oct 30 05, 14:01
|- - JustDaniel   I'd never read this before, Nina... Eloquent ...   Dec 9 06, 13:04
- - Nina   Hi Nef  :wave: >N>HUH!  The comput...   Oct 30 05, 14:20
- - poeticpiers   Words are weapons words are tools used alike by wi...   Mar 22 06, 16:40
- - Nina   Hi Ivor >I>Words are weapons words are tools used...   Mar 22 06, 16:48
- - ArtesiaMeeks   Nina, My favorite lines are Words wrap around ...   Mar 23 06, 11:13
- - Nina   Hi AM QUOTE My favorite lines are Words wrap a...   Mar 23 06, 16:49
- - poeticpiers   In the beggining was the word The word initiated a...   Jun 27 06, 14:59
- - Aphrodite   Hi Nina~ I am pleased to read this once again a...   Jul 4 06, 10:16
- - jgdittier   Dear Nina, Wheras modern emphasis is on the messag...   Jul 21 06, 06:21
- - Nina   Hi Ron It is good to see you on MM again and I ho...   Jul 22 06, 01:11
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congrats Nina on your wizard award winning tile! ...   Sep 16 06, 11:57
- - Blank_Canvas   Nina, In my opinion this is as powerful as an...   Dec 4 06, 12:57
- - Peterpan   So Nina, you have some more hidden treasures! ...   Dec 4 06, 14:50
- - Nina   Hi Marcia and Bev Thanks very much both of you fo...   Dec 9 06, 05:45
- - Don   Dear Nina, Among my favorites is: Or kill creati...   Dec 9 06, 15:06
- - Nina   Thanks very much Daniel and Don Don - As a non-Ch...   Dec 10 06, 01:31

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