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post Feb 12 06, 18:23
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Musical Seduction   (revised)

Crystal-pure notes,
filtered on zephyrs,
swirl through
sun-dappled trees.

Mesmerising melody
entices me, unresisting,
into forest’s secret glade.

Tendrils of harmony
coil around my being;
draw me into your arms;
weave a shared destiny.

As music spins enchantment,
we spiral upwards:
an inter-twined,
shimmering presence,
whirling into infinity.





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Musical Seduction (original)

Crystal-pure notes,
carried on the breeze,
swirl through
sun-dappled trees.

Mesmerising melody
entices me, unresisting,
into forest’s secret glade.

Tendrils of harmony
coil around my being;
draw me into your arms;
weave a shared destiny.

As music spins enchantment,
we spiral upwards:
an inter-twined,
shimmering presence,
whirling into infinity.

© Nina  2006

Nina




 
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Guest_Nina_*
post Feb 24 06, 12:41
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Hi Cat

>C>I don't know how I missed this but I'm glad I found it!  I love it!  The dreamy, fantasy aura is lovely and sensual.

I'm glad you found your way here eventually and I'm delighted you love it so.

Crystal-pure notes,
filtered on zephyrs,
swirl through
sun-dappled trees.


>C>I think I like these lines the best!  lol  I can see the little notes drifting around on soft winds, in and out of the leaves as though they are playing!  I love the picture it brings to my mind.

Thank you.  :)  

>C>Thanks for sharing!

and thank you for reading and commenting

Nina
 
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