Musical Seduction :sunny: Options

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Musical Seduction   (revised)

Crystal-pure notes,
filtered on zephyrs,
swirl through
sun-dappled trees.

Mesmerising melody
entices me, unresisting,
into forest’s secret glade.

Tendrils of harmony
coil around my being;
draw me into your arms;
weave a shared destiny.

As music spins enchantment,
we spiral upwards:
an inter-twined,
shimmering presence,
whirling into infinity.




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Musical Seduction (original)

Crystal-pure notes,
carried on the breeze,
swirl through
sun-dappled trees.

Mesmerising melody
entices me, unresisting,
into forest’s secret glade.

Tendrils of harmony
coil around my being;
draw me into your arms;
weave a shared destiny.

As music spins enchantment,
we spiral upwards:
an inter-twined,
shimmering presence,
whirling into infinity.

© Nina  2006

Nina

[Guest_Nina_*]

Hi Sylvia

>S>This is so magical and romantic ! Delicately written, with wonderful images of nature and love interwoven. The musical background makes it even more beautiful.

Thank you very much.


There were several images in my head, partly metaphorical, partly fantasy and partly the couple coming together sexually and spiralling to a climax.


>S>Here again, of course, it could be a picture of death in her nicer aspects. After all, many a time death has been described as shining light, music, a person spiraling up to meet the loved ones that went before, and so on... An altogether lovely poem.

It is interesting you should mention death. The notion did flit through my mind (I can't resist the dark side, lol), though I hadn't considered spiralling to meet loved ones who have already died.

Thanks very much for your thoughtful comments, much appreciated.

Nina