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 Feb 8 06, 15:15
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 *Graphic provided by Celtic Castle Designs Faery Award Winner  Celtic Castle Designs Taken by the Sea Walking along the seashore, my footsteps make light impressions in wet sand. Behind me, turning tide erases all traces. Cool breeze brushes my face; ruffles curling strands of hair. Gossamer garments cling, accentuating body contours. You’re waiting: a distant figure, riding white horses, cresting waves. I move towards you: seduced into deeper water by unseen currents. Time slows; I feel you near. © Nina 2006 Nina |
  
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Feb 11 06, 06:17
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 1,547 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Jeddah, Saudi Arabia Member No.: 13 Real Name: Daniah Writer of: Poetry |
Hey Nina,
What a seductive and tender piece! Cool breeze brushes my face; ruffles curling strands of hair. Gossamer garments cling, accentuating body contours. Killer Stanza! Loved the gossamer garments part. Always a pleasure to read you.... Dani ·······  ·······Happiness is a journey, not a destination.
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Nina Taken by the Sea Feb 8 06, 15:15 
Jox Hi Nina,
Fantastic! I love this.
There are ... Feb 8 06, 16:30 Cathy Hi Nina,
I love the title! This could b... Feb 8 06, 17:02 Nina Hi J
>J>Fantastic! I love this.
Wow! tha... Feb 8 06, 17:18 Nina Hi Cathy
>C>I love the title! This coul... Feb 8 06, 17:32 Cyn oooo spooky ending and wonderful, the lure of the ... Feb 8 06, 17:48 Nina Hi Cyn
>C>oooo spooky ending and wonderful, the l... Feb 8 06, 17:58 Jox Hi Nina,
Thanks for your reply.
Hi J
>J>Fantast... Feb 9 06, 05:35 Toumai Hi Nina
I haven't been in here anything like ... Feb 9 06, 09:27 Nina Hi J
>N> Wow! thank you. I'm reet c... Feb 9 06, 12:15 Nina Hi Fran
>F>I haven't been in here anything li... Feb 9 06, 12:19 Psyche Hi Nina ! :sun:
This is one of your ve... Feb 10 06, 13:11 Nina Hi Sylvia
>S>This is one of your very best ! ... Feb 10 06, 14:53 Nina Hi Dani
Thanks for popping in here to read and fo... Feb 11 06, 06:21 manofwords73 Nina,
Haunting work. You leave a lot to the reader... Feb 11 06, 12:00 Nina Hi Kenneth
>K>Haunting work.
Thank you. I... Feb 12 06, 01:44 Peterpan Well written Nina! Very cleverly worded! E... Feb 12 06, 03:18 Nina Hi Bev
Thanks for your comments. I'm pl... Feb 12 06, 03:46 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Nina on your faery award winning tile!
... Feb 25 06, 07:51 Nina Thanks very much Lori,
I'm delighted this ha... Feb 25 06, 08:03 Toumai Very well deserved, Nina. This is a wonderful poem... Feb 25 06, 08:05 Nina Thanks very much Fran
Nina Feb 25 06, 08:08 Cathy CONGRATS on the award Nina!
I enjoyed reading... Feb 25 06, 08:38 Nina Thank you very much Cathy
I'm chuffed you enj... Feb 25 06, 09:15 Jox Hi Nina,
Very well done - and congratulations - o... Feb 25 06, 14:16 Nina Hi J
>J>Very well done - and congratulations - on... Feb 25 06, 14:28 Cyn Congrats on this great poem and this deserved awar... Feb 25 06, 16:30 Nina Thanks very much Cyn
:)
Nina Feb 25 06, 16:45 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Nina on your wizard award winning tile!
... Aug 19 06, 10:52 Cathy Congratulations on both awards Nina! I've... Aug 19 06, 14:42 
Eisa You have definitely deserved your 2 awards here NI... Aug 19 06, 16:56 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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