A Trio of Poems Options

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These 3 poems were done as a grade 10 English Lit Creative Writing project.
 
The project was called "bridging the gap" it had to be a set of 3 poems or a single short story that included 2 different generations.  We had the option of doing both if we wanted extra credit - I had both done within 2 days and we had 2 weeks to work on it.  It's funny I don't have the story any more - but it was about when my little brother thre my good tea set out the window when I was 5 or 6 years old.

The third poem very loosely fit the criteria because I mentioned parents right at the end - but the teacher gave it to me anyway - a 175% on that project is probably what brought my grade up to passing that year - I lost 25% because of punctuation and grammer in my story


The Tractor Ride

The wheat was tall and golden,
The wind was sweet and cool,
My Grandfather was old and energetic,
The tractor seat was big and round,
My Granfather's touch was soft and warm,
And I was young and excited.
The tractor started with a spit and a sputter,
It moved smoothly and slowly,
It was a long and relaxing ride.
When it stopped,
I was fast asleep,
In my Grandfather's arms.


The Unknown Sight"

The long sleek figure,
Glides through the air.
Children watch with excitement,
Adults look and see nothing there,
What they saw,
I have never known.
For when they saw it,
I had already grown.


The Sand Box

The sand box was my heart's delight.
It was just an old black tire,
that was overflowing with sand.
In my sandbox I became God.
I built the world in a day,
And watched it crumble in the rain.
I would build a castle
And be princess for a day.
I would play for hours on end,
And the only time I would climb
Out of my imaginary world,
Would be when my parents
Called me in for lunch.

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Hi Crys and a big welcome to MM from me, too. Great to see you here - I hope you'll be very happy. As Lori and Nina have said please do shout if you wish to ask anything.

I enjoyed your three poems.

Tractor Ride - I enjoyed the simplistic innocence which it conveys. Quite a tough way to write.

Unknown Sight - This is very sophisticated and uses rhyme very cleverly. However imaginative adults are, few (if any) can see the World as children do and this understated poem evokes that well.

SandBox

Reminds me of my late dogs. We bought them various toys which they completely disregarded. However, we had a number of empty plastic tub containers lying around which they stole and played with for a long time. A toy is what our imagination makes it. Many less complex toys are better because we can make more of them.

A great set thanks for the read and well done. Much enjoyed.

I look forward to reading more of your work on MM in the near future.

Best wishes, James.

Thanks,  I'm glad you liked the read  :cheer: