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 Oct 24 03, 02:44
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Dear Z
Quite an accomplihment ! To produce a funny poem which can engender such even funnier responses ! Reminds me of Christian Morganstern's The Night Song of Fishes. Love Alan |
  
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Oct 23 03, 10:56
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Dammitall Z. How many times do you have to be told.
Iambic pentameter. The beat is way off!  Di Dah Di Dah Di Dah Di Dah Di Dah Look at that volta. Shame on you.  One final crit. The rhyme scheme is out of sync. ABBA ABBA CDE CDE Lor, some people never learn.  A |
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