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 Jul 8 04, 21:51
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 19,923 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
... and now I've gained 3 more pounds back! Did you have to make me look so intensely and make all those other suggestions! It's all YOUR fault!
not-so-Lightly now, Daniel :cool: ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Jul 8 04, 20:17
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Hi Daniah,
Goodness, gracious, didn't know you had it in you!  This is wonderful. I enjoyed from beginning to end, or should I say admired from head to toe or rather from end to end. The eclair has a chocolate twist! The formatting, the pace, the terse but juicy words were all perfect! I was curious why someone would be named Tropical Kisses…I’ll try not to gaze next time, but then I never do anyway…yeah, right.  David |
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JustDaniel Dear Sir Jul 8 04, 21:51 
Cleo_Serapis How clever Dani! :pharoah2
What a laugh out loud!... Jan 18 04, 09:58 Dear Daniel
I don't have enuff fingers and to... Jan 18 04, 07:36 codger Nicely done
Gerry. Jan 18 04, 06:43 JustDaniel d'eclair
de truth, Dani!
diditgetchewtobuy... Jan 18 04, 07:08 Dear Dani
As an English comedian used to say :
O... Dec 1 03, 04:36 Siren QUOTE (Alan @ Dec. 01 2003, 03:36)Dear Dani
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Siren Dear Sir,
I sit here quietly
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