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Tears ' ' ' ' ', Autumn Football

Guest_Zeus²_*	Sep 16 04, 06:55 Post #1
Guest	Tears…. Tears keep f a l l i n g like leaves, down into the depths of my soul, It was so sudden did not see it coming though there were signs, were so successful up to that time we were happy, then, little things began to occur mistakes were made, argument began to rear its ugly head clear minded we were not, we knew the end was near never to be the same again, excuses don’t make amends can we still be together? time will tell changes to be made there is always forgiveness, what do we say to all, have faith someday we will learn from our mistakes. Niners’ 39- Giants’38 (2002)

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heartsong7 View Member Profile Find Member's Posts	Sep 26 04, 12:16 Post #2
Creative Chieftain Group: Gold Member Posts: 862 Joined: 25-June 04 From: Ohio, USA Member No.: 70 Real Name: Susan Eckenrode Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Merlin	What a treat! I didn't know to the end this was about football. Well done! Sue ·············· Forgiveness is the fragrance the violet sheds on the heel that has crushed it. MM Award Winner