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  Oct 29 03, 00:20
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Grazing horses wait
mealtime hay now arrives lean patience now filled. Pasture given rest worn blades growing tall showing hidden bloom. New pasture bridge-way six hundred foot mud puppies from wetland to here. Overhang gutter downspout channeling filling water trough. Canadian wind cold pulling mane southward summer to winter. |
  
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Oct 29 03, 18:10
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Yeah! Ride em cowboy. Very descriptive Stephen. That cold wind will be arriving any day now. A few more weeks and it will be time to get the snowploughs out.
One small crit. You used now twice in avery short verse. You might like to consider losing one of them. Grazing horses wait mealtime hay arrives lean patience now filled. Tom |
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Brahms Seasoning Oct 29 03, 00:20 
Cybele Hello Stephen
QUOTEGrazing horses wait
mealtime ... Oct 29 03, 01:54 Brahms What amazing kind goodwill you write with, Grace,
... Oct 29 03, 09:21 Zeus² HI Stephen,
Like this, little vignettes observed a... Oct 29 03, 13:57 Brahms Such is me wish, man of Larry Z, and ease to thee;... Oct 29 03, 14:11 
Brahms I know, Tom 'cause every time I look at my hai... Oct 29 03, 19:10 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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