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 Apr 11 05, 12:20
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Apr 12 05, 02:27
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Good morning Mick,
Love it. Love it! Couldn't keep a smile off my face all the way through.  Ralph once told me a story of a conference he attended, (before I met him) when he had an upset stomach so decided he wouldn't have a drink in the evenng. He spent the time watching his normal well-balanced friends getting gradually drunker (and greyer) and ever more convinced of their irresistability to women. They all fell into bed alone (those that made it.) One fell alseep half in and half out of an opening and shutting lift! Your poem is a perfect illustration to that little ancedote. Brought back a wonderful memory for me.  Thank you very much.
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Billydo Slick Mick Apr 11 05, 12:20 
Jox Hi Mike,
Can't stop to crit now but just want... Apr 11 05, 12:30 Dear Mick,
There is no way to crit this ! A t... Apr 11 05, 15:39 Billydo Hi Alan
I don't know what "Bouncer" is. Than... Apr 12 05, 02:29 Jox Hi Mike,
I hope you do feel able to post your dar... Apr 12 05, 02:41 Billydo Hi Grace
Thank you. I'm pleased you enjoyed. ... Apr 12 05, 02:48 Billydo James, I don't know what to say except thanks,... Apr 12 05, 03:00 Toumai Hi Mike,
This really brought back ... Apr 12 05, 03:45 Dear Mike,
"Bouncers" is a very funny play in whi... Apr 12 05, 03:59 Billydo Hi Fran
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. As to ... Apr 12 05, 05:09 Don Hi Billydo,
A canter into canteen to dunk a dram... Apr 12 05, 08:13 Nina Hi Mike
I enjoyed your minimalist poem and it rem... Apr 12 05, 17:01 Jox Hi Mike,
Great avatar - is it fireworks or someth... Apr 12 05, 17:04 
Billydo Hi James
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