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Mar 15 05, 13:35
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Real Name: Ron Jones
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First a letter, then a word and now a sentence thought... Has in fact a start occurred from which some verse be wrought?
Once a stanza now be writ let's locate das and dums. Slash and dash a form, be it. When filled it sings, it strums.
Rhyme?, it must, if j g d's. A scheme be now assigned. Vow, must I, I'll them appease or I shall be maligned.
Yore's the time I must promote, our taste today will fade. Milton, make this boat to float Don't rain on my parade.
Windmills may be ready ploys for questers just like me. Poems come from men, not boys. You may, or not, agree. "|1124640857 -->
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Mar 15 05, 18:15
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First a letter, then a word Trochee trochee trochee monosyllable and now a sentence thought... Iamb iamb iamb Has in fact a start occurred Trochee trochee trochee monosyllable from which some verse be wrought? Iamb iamb iamb
Once a stanza now be writ Trochee trochee trochee monosyllable let's locate das and dums. Iamb iamb iamb Slash and dash a form, be it. Trochee trochee trochee monosyllable When filled it sings, it strums. Iamb iamb iamb
Rhyme?, it must, if j g d's. Trochee trochee trochee monosyllable A scheme be now as signed. Iamb iamb iamb Vow, must I, I'll them appease Monosyllable iamb iamb iamb or I shall be maligned. Iamb iamb iamb
Yore's the time I must promote, Monosyllable iamb iamb iamb our taste to day will fade. Iamb iamb iamb Milton, make this boat to float Trochee trochee trochee monosyllable Don't rain on my parade. Iamb iamb iamb
Windmills may be ready ploys Trochee trochee trochee monosyllable for questers just like me. Iamb iamb iamb Poems come from men, not boys. Spondee iamb iamb You may, or not, agree. Iamb iamb iamb
LINE FEET 1.............4 2.............3 3.............4 4.............3 5.............4 6.............3 7.............4 8.............3 9.............4 10...........3 11...........4 12...........3 13...........4 14...........3 15...........4 16...........3 17...........4 18...........3 19...........3....exception to pattern--important line 20...........3
Lines alternate between tetrameter and trimeter except for line 19.
Above scansion of metric feet is strictly my own. Others may not agree.
If anyone is willing I desire more education via discussion.
Don
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jgdittier A Recipe for Verse By Me*** Mar 15 05, 13:35 Don Hi Ron,
Upon first read, I like rhythm and subjec... Mar 15 05, 14:28 JustDaniel Dear Ron...
Those missing upbeats seem to cause
m... Mar 15 05, 15:46 jgdittier Dear Don,
Responses so soon are starting to scare ... Mar 15 05, 16:49 Don Well, Ron, I think you protest too much about bein... Mar 15 05, 18:02 JustDaniel Ron and Don,
please know that neither of you are ... Mar 16 05, 03:17 jgdittier Dear Don,
Thank-you,thank-you!
You are the fir... Mar 16 05, 07:44 jgdittier Dear Daniel,
Four years ago I knew what a iamb was... Mar 16 05, 08:03 JustDaniel Iamb not averse to verse!
The wittier Iamb,
tr... Mar 16 05, 08:20 Don Responding to Ron and Daniel,
This conversation i... Mar 16 05, 09:54 Nina Hi Ron
You and I approach poetry writing from opp... Mar 17 05, 09:51 Jox Hi Ron,
This isn't about me but please indulg... Mar 17 05, 10:09 jgdittier Dear Daniel,
I hate to disagree, but you, my frien... Mar 17 05, 12:47 jgdittier Dear Don,
Yesterday I wrote a long response to you... Mar 17 05, 13:07 jgdittier Dear Nina,
Poetry is such a big field that one mig... Mar 17 05, 13:11 jgdittier Dear James,
I believe you are likely to be even mo... Mar 17 05, 13:41 Don QUOTE(jgdittier @ Mar. 17 2005, 13:07)Dear Do... Mar 17 05, 14:25 Don Hi James~~
I've indulged your minute, and fou... Mar 17 05, 14:32 Jox Hi Ron...
Thank you for your very understanding a... Mar 17 05, 14:46 Jox Hi Ron, excuse me for a moment.
Hi Don...
>>I... Mar 17 05, 14:49 Cleo_Serapis Hi Ron. :sun:
I missed the piece when you ... Jun 25 05, 06:16 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Ron on your Member Choice award winning t... Aug 8 05, 05:22 Jox Hi Ron,
Well done for you and your excellent self... Aug 8 05, 05:27 Cathy Hi Ron,
Congratulations on a well-deserved award... Aug 8 05, 07:51 Nina Hi Ron
Congratulations on winning this award. ... Aug 8 05, 11:21 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Ron on your wizard award winning tile!
... Aug 21 05, 11:15 Nina Hi Ron
Congratulations on your Wizard Award for t... Aug 21 05, 11:29 Jox Hi Ron,
Congrats on your Wizard Award and members... Aug 21 05, 12:25 Cathy Congratulations on a well deserved set of awards... Aug 21 05, 17:36 Don Congratulations Ron on your well deserved and earn... Aug 23 05, 09:38 Toumai Excellent awards, Ron :pharoah2
Fran Aug 23 05, 11:09
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