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 Jan 15 05, 13:08
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| Guest_Jox_* |
 Jan 10 05, 09:35
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Cathy, Hi... thank you very much - very helpful.
You most certainly do not offend me; your (and Fran's and John's) comments are very useful - precisely what I need to shape the work. I was trying to use a certain cuteness which I had intended to be shattered by the final word "slaughtered" but seems I've not suceeded yet. I must think again. I am curious on one thing, though: "the birds getting revenge upon humans...but I don't think you want it read that way" That was precisely what I did mean in the poem. All the prose I wrote was simply explaining how I arrived at that stage. The poem does not address those other issues. I am addressing them in different pieces (like the prose one from which an extract was taken, but not in this). Emm.. puzzled now.. I suppose I just have to make the revenge less comical? Less cute? Thanks Cathy... much appreciated. James. |
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Nina The Pheasant Jan 15 05, 13:08 
Nina Hi James
My post obviously didn't come across... Jan 15 05, 12:26 Jox Hi Nina,
Thanks again for popping back and sticki... Jan 15 05, 12:50 Jox You're very kind, Nina, Thank you very much. Jan 15 05, 13:44 Jox © James Oxenholme, 2005. I, James Oxenholme, do as... Jan 9 05, 18:44 JLY James, this seems like some kind of reversal of fo... Jan 10 05, 06:55 Toumai Hi, James,
I can usually throw myself off the ed... Jan 10 05, 06:58 Jox Hi John and Fran,
Thank you both for commenting. ... Jan 10 05, 07:24 Toumai Hi James,
I was definitely missing the intention.... Jan 10 05, 07:43 Jox Hi Fran, thanks for your reply and sorry to make y... Jan 10 05, 07:50 Cathy Hi James!
I think you have a very valid compl... Jan 10 05, 09:21 Cathy Others may not see it that way James. Maybe ... Jan 10 05, 12:10 Jox Cathy, I've already lost my "MM Minimalist" cr... Jan 10 05, 12:27 jgdittier Dear James,
I'm still new here at least in my ... Jan 12 05, 15:03 Jox Hi Ron,
Thank you very much for your interest an... Jan 12 05, 16:31 Nina Hi James
I read your poem a couple of days ago, w... Jan 12 05, 16:39 Jox Nina,
Hello and thank you. Thanks also for taking... Jan 12 05, 17:18 jgdittier Dear Jox,
From my point of view, in depth discussi... Jan 13 05, 10:42 jgdittier Dear James,
For an example of a "think piece" fail... Jan 13 05, 11:08 Nina Hi James
On the other hand, how do the repressed ... Jan 13 05, 18:33 Jox Hi Nina, thanks for re-visiting.
To be trivial fo... Jan 15 05, 05:54 JohnK James,
This piece did make me chuckle. I... Jan 18 05, 10:25 Jox John good to meet you - I'll say Hello properl... Jan 18 05, 13:03 JohnK Hello James, and apologies for the delay in replyi... Jan 20 05, 17:23 Jox Hi John.
I think we've come to various agreem... Jan 20 05, 17:37 Cleo_Serapis CONGRATS Jox on your Wizard Award winning tile!
... Jan 23 05, 09:41 Nina Hi James
congratulations on your wizard award. ... Jan 23 05, 09:53 Jox Lori & Nina,
Thank you both very much indeed.
Ni... Jan 23 05, 13:23 Toumai Hi James,
A wonderfully thought-provoking piece; ... Jan 23 05, 14:40 Jox Fran,
Thank you very much - you comments mean muc... Jan 23 05, 15:21 Psyche Hi James !
I love the idea of your poem, but ... Jan 31 05, 10:47 Jox Hi Sylvia,
Thank you very much for your visit and... Jan 31 05, 12:21 Psyche Hi James !
That was a long doorbell ring. Glad... Jan 31 05, 18:01 Jox Hi Sylvia...
That was a long doorbell ring.
More... Jan 31 05, 18:45 Psyche Me again !
No, you've depressed me even mo... Jan 31 05, 19:41 Jox Hi Sylvia,
Sorry to have depressed you more - not... Jan 31 05, 20:20 Toumai Hi James,
Sylvia, I don't think you're of... Jan 31 05, 23:44 Jox Hi Fran, Thanks for popping back.
Neither of you ... Feb 1 05, 06:00 Nina Hi James
I have been trying to catch up on this f... Feb 1 05, 16:28 
Jox Hi Nina,
Good to see you back; thank you.
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