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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
  Aug 9 04, 08:48
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Crown Jewels Award
 Celtic Castle Designs Shrouded Echoes, A midnight luminescence veils the sea, it twinkles, bobbing in reflective rays. Celestial constellations in ballet as diamonds pas de duex in blackened tea. The moonlight skims across the crested waves... a phosphorescent glow of rippling foam, beneath the creatures effortlessly roam uncounted depths of salty water graves. Now through a liquid skyline sunrays peek, the sea’s so calm, with not a wave in sight. As wispy clouds disperse in wingless flight the day is new with glory that will speak. Aside a piece of driftwood floats on by, a gull was perched there, hesitant to fly. |
  
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| Guest_Taita_* |
Oct 3 04, 20:42
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Hey Zeus,
This was a pleasure to read for some of the descriptive/adventurous language. It flows beautifully and the images are quite haunting...the big deep. An excellent effort :dance: :grinning: |
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Zeus˛ Shrouded Echoes Aug 9 04, 08:48 
Cleo_Serapis Hi Larry! :knight:
This is absolutely stun... Aug 15 04, 08:06 Nefertiti Ah, Zeus,
You have me swooning with your mastery ... Mar 24 05, 21:48 Aphrodite Hello Larry~
This is an absolutely sparkling piec... Mar 26 05, 15:17 Zeus˛ DRB,
thanks for your comments and stopping by.
Lar... Mar 29 05, 11:30 Zeus˛ Miss Nef,
ready to be swept away huh!!... Mar 29 05, 11:32 Zeus˛ Hi Lindi,
Thanks for the wonderful comments.
I mu... Mar 29 05, 11:34 Ivy Rose This is a brilliant work. Dazzling imagery and fan... Apr 3 05, 20:17 Zeus˛ Hi Sharon,
Thank you for your nice comments. This ... Apr 5 05, 14:06 Cleo_Serapis Congrat on your Crown Jewels award winning tile La... Apr 5 05, 18:47 Jox Hi Larry,
I'm delighted that you have an awar... Apr 5 05, 18:52 Toumai Hi Larry,
This is very beautiful. Congratulations... Apr 6 05, 02:49 Zeus˛ Lor,
my humble thanks for the award.
Hugs
Larry Apr 6 05, 17:17 Zeus˛ James,
appreciate your kind words and comments.
Th... Apr 6 05, 17:19 
Zeus˛ Fran,
Thank you for your wonderful comments.
Larry Apr 6 05, 17:20 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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