Why, Night? Options

[Guest_blondie_*]

Why, Night?

Why, night,
must you entrap me
with your sickening hug
of coldness
as I cry?
Why, night,
do you hold me
in your ghastly grip
of loneliness?
Your touch has failed me,
holding no comfort.
Release me,
for I want you
no more.
I would rather grasp
his frigid hand
and wipe away
my own tears.

[Guest_recherche_*]

hello blondie finally had time to read some poems ... glad i stumbled upon yours !!! :pharoah2

Why, Night?

Why, night,
must you entrap me
with your sickening hug
of coldness
as I cry?
Why, night,
do you hold me
in your ghastly grip
of loneliness?
Your touch has failed me,
holding no sought comfort.
Release me,
for I want you
no more.    ...........  ( these lines are simply sublime !!!! )  

me likes the verse ending here ....  brilliant , smiply brilliant !    

take care ... kevin