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 Nov 29 17, 12:43
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 Trojan  Posts: 859 Joined: 27-October 10 From: Havelock Ontario Canada Member No.: 1,150 Real Name: Denis Barter Writer of: Poetry  |
Must get kitted out,
to get co-operation, for fat cat, catscan! I must ‘paws’ for thought, before a catastrophe furthers a lost cause. To categorise a fine catscan catalogue, is the cat’s miaow! Rhymer, November 29th, 2017. (My first attempt at this) |
  
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Dec 30 17, 09:49
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,722 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
Hey Denis,
I've been looking around the "net" for triple Senryu and found that most of them are written where the second and third Senryu follow the first's subject matter without puns or allusions. I have never written one of these although I have penned nearly 800 single Senryu. Can't critique what I have no experience writing! They are funny which is what a Senryu is supposed to be but I think you may be "forcing" the similarities a bit. Joke: What does a dog do when coming into a new yard? A cat-scan! Larry ·······  ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner       |
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Rhymer A Feline Fooling! Nov 29 17, 12:43 
Arnfinn G'day Denis.
You seem to have the gist of thi... Jan 30 18, 05:28 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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