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 Oct 18 17, 16:51
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 Assyrian  Posts: 250 Joined: 1-November 15 Member No.: 5,282 Real Name: richard chase Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Rhapsody  |
Love’s a word beyond words. Language, duncelike, can’t explain it. You want it past all meaning, like a rosebud opening in surprise inside a breeze in your chest, so breathtaking you're afraid it's not yours to keep. Sometimes it’s a deluge you don’t understand, that submerges you under skies that clear to the warmth of focus on the other. Your impassable mountains fall to a new horizon. Touch alone brings a harvest that shines, grains of sand prisms in its light. Take this love, you’ll find more. |
  
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Nov 4 17, 19:05
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Assyrian Posts: 250 Joined: 1-November 15 Member No.: 5,282 Real Name: richard chase Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Rhapsody |
Thanks Daniel - I do appreciate it - Best - RC
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RC James Speechless (Oaxaca #1) Oct 18 17, 16:51 
JustDaniel That's rather exquisite, Richard!
deLight... Oct 30 17, 12:57 
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