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 Jan 12 17, 14:18
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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
A solar storm swirls,
mountains appear to collapse, no comfort but a searing silicon heart collides with past reality. A speck of an eye no longer casts allusions, tendrils yield a new kingdom they retain the succulence of disease. Evolution gallops into the unfolding unseen the metal grey skies skirmish the thirsting figurines yonder ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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Feb 8 17, 11:27
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Assyrian Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy |
Thank you kindly for your tips. Very helpful as ever
······· ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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greenwich XCAPE Jan 12 17, 14:18 
Psyche Great poem, Antony.
Nice alliterations and some in... Jan 15 17, 19:43 greenwich Thank you. The idea fir the poem came from silicon... Jan 16 17, 14:43 Psyche Thank you for the explanation, Antony.
I really li... Jan 27 17, 23:36 Eisa Hi Antony,
I'm with Syl on this one and reall... Feb 7 17, 08:21 
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