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 Nov 28 16, 15:33
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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
For a shared coffee
she'd seemingly be your confidante promising to dispel your woes. Her flashing green nail polish will lead you to reflection of a forests entrance unlike anything seen. Until your soul wades into a bag of pumpkin seeds. So much for empathy Perhaps this was her smile. Her own barbwire rouge. ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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Nov 29 16, 12:23
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Assyrian Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy |
Imagine wading through a packet of pumpkin seeds. I am sure you'd drown . Naturally you have to sink to do this
That's the power of this lady. ······· ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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greenwich The kiss off Nov 28 16, 15:33 
Psyche Hi Antony,
Good one, Antony, but I have to admit ... Nov 28 16, 16:37 
Psyche OMG, Antony, wading thru' pumpkin seeds seems ... Dec 4 16, 00:52 Eisa A powerful lady indeed !
I really love pumpk... Dec 7 16, 17:32 Ali zonak Hi, Greenwich,
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