Autumn's Breeze, Huitain Options

[Larry]

Autumn’s Breeze

Forestall that chilling breath which augurs change
and pirouettes the leaves in slow ballets
on air. Your choreographies arrange
them on the ground in colors that amaze.
Spare some that early fate while summer wanes
to give the forests time to fully blaze
and me, warm afternoons in quiet lanes
to thank how nature's palette lets me gaze.



the last line did read: to see how nature's palette can amaze

[Larry]

Thank you Lori and Snow,

I appreciate your visit and your kind words. I didn't believe Daniel when he said I should post my Huitain here
because it might get some feedback and lure some people in to read it. Surprise!!!

Lori, Daniel and I have been swapping a few of these over in Karnak if you care to read some more.

Snow, I think the format you use is what Daniel calls "an enclosed huitain ". He's written a few of that type also
and you may also find them in the Huitain string in Karnak.

Again, Thanks for the visit.

Larry