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JustDaniel
post Oct 10 15, 16:42
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A Comeback to Larry and Denis

come back
to the bent road
of the shadow country
where all the birds, singing, point
to the narrow road to the deep north where
Tigerheart, the girl in the road
has hung on for dear life
since the folly
came back


... using the titles:

Come Back
Bent Road
Shadow Country
All the Birds, Singing
The Narrow Road to the Deep North
Tigerheart
The Girl in the Road
Dear Life
The Folly




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Rhymer
post Oct 13 15, 06:10
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A new format as I have discovered since reading this effort of yours! I seem to have covered much of what I would say, in my last reply to your comment regarding my own attempt - A Passing Scene. Always enjoy a challenge and reading how others attempt it. Catch you later. Garden calls. Ciao Denis.
 
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