L O G L I M E R H Y M ELoglimerhyme is Larry Jennings' metrical variant of the standard
iambic of
Logarhymes. In place of the usual 442442-
iamb meter, he utilizes a
limerick-like pattern of 332332
pulses in each sextet (6-line) stanza. The rhyme pattern is that of the standard
Logarhyme: AABCCB. My own dubbing of Larry's variant as
'Loglimerhyme' has met with his approval.
Here is his first (so far as I know) such creation:
Loglimerhyme #1If that pie were mincemeat, I would choke
though I know it's enjoyed by some folk,
never been one of them.
Coconut or pecan on the beach
sounds quite nice. Think I'd have one of each
or key-lime. On a whim,
I have tried other country's cuisine
with delight, though some were garish green
made from sea-weed, I guess.
Others curried and spiced with, "who knows?"
They were delicacies I suppose
but not mine. I confess
to a penchant for food from the south.
Etouffee or gumbo in my mouth
is like Heaven on earth.
Though from Texas, I like chili too
and a big plate of good barbecue
which might add to my girth.
Thank the Lord for my genetic past
which made my metabolic rate fast;
sedentary I'm not.
I work harder now that I'm retired.
It's as if gardening has conspired
that I not go to pot.
© Larry D Jennings 13 April 2012After a several-riposte discussion between Larry and myself, this is my own first
Loglimerhyme:
Loglimerhyme ApprobationLoglimerhymes seem really fun;
though surely for not everyone,
so I offer you mine.
I certainly do understand
and certify your fledgling brand;
it's deliciously fine.
Iamb sure that you'll note that
iambsare required in pure
Logarhyme brand
yet your variant is
but a breath of fresh air to my ears
so I hope this allays any fears
and you won't let it fizz.
© MLee Dickens'son 18 April 2012Here's hoping others will join in on the fun!
deLightingly, Daniel