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Am I a poet or do I work for a lawyer?
What am I, I ask, what is underneath this mask? Is it deception or truth, in what I owe, or am I just a musing soul, to all who know? All those shredded papers, I no longer see, it is apparent, I have left them, for now I am me. What about extra money, I could bank right now? No thank you, I would rather, be working as a clown. Years of lies and deceit, haunting words such as "sue," thank God, up above, for my conscience to leave you! I write down my feelings, and remember before, quiet moments of reflection, lawyer's arrogance, no more. My lesson to make changes, is here for all to view, poets do live forever, pondering thoughts, old and new. |
  
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Sep 6 03, 07:32
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 19,923 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Shava, sis, Matti, Marcia, or whichever it is . . .
I'd like to see what you do with the suggestions you've gotten so far with a revision to offer anything further. I'm new on this block, so I ain't about to jump in where I ain't welcome. Good ponderin' here on where you've been and don't want to return! Write on! Lightly, Daniel :sun: ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Am I a poet or do I work for a lawyer? Aug 24 03, 09:26 
Aphrodite QUOTE(Shava @ Aug. 24 2003, 09:26)Am I a poet... Aug 24 03, 12:32 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Shava @ Aug. 24 2003, 10:26)Am I a poet... Aug 24 03, 16:53 Dear Shava
"thank God, up above, for my conscious... Aug 24 03, 18:31 Aphrodite QUOTE(Shava @ Aug. 24 2003, 09:26)Am I a poet... Aug 24 03, 19:00 Zeus˛ Matti,
The poetry is far more entertaining, than h... Aug 25 03, 06:57 Hi Alan:
Thank you for bring this to my attention... Aug 25 03, 15:28 Aphro:
Thanks for you suggestion. I do like ... Aug 25 03, 15:30 Hello Zues:
Thank you for your words. I cou... Aug 25 03, 15:33 Hey Cleo:
Thank you very much for commenting on m... Aug 25 03, 15:35 Charon Enjoyed a bunch. Having once been married to... Aug 25 03, 20:01 Dear Shava
"I could actually write a book on my e... Aug 26 03, 00:46 Nefertiti ARG! LAWYERS! Heaven help us a... Aug 27 03, 17:35 Brahms Comfortable entrance into choppy seas
we most have... Aug 28 03, 13:33 Dear AtH,
First of all, thank you for your nice ... Aug 28 03, 19:07 Dear Nef:
Thank you for you responding to my poem... Aug 28 03, 19:19 Brahms:
Nice. I really had to read what you... Aug 28 03, 19:29 
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