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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 19,130 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
What Does it Mean?
What does it mean to please someone? Do anything to get along? or should I work to understand, befriend, and try to lend a hand? At times, the process won't be fun. What pleases God? Look to His Son. Attend His Word; know right from wrong. What's PC? No! Seek true peace, and What does it mean? Is there something that will atone? Can we talk on the telephone? To reconcile's no magic wand; relationships have shifting sand. Ask God to guide; don't act alone. What does it mean? © MLee Dickens'son 2014 ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Nov 24 14, 07:02
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 783 Joined: 24-July 07 From: South Africa Member No.: 457 Real Name: Walter Schwim Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Mistral |
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For me each poem must select its own form to say what it has to say, that is why I seldom participate in challenges. I think you struggled with this one by trying too hard to comply with form. In the end neither the message or the structure worked out. I did follow the poem's sentiment but perhaps not as you would have liked. I know that wont keep you down for long. Cheers, Wally ······· ······· |
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JustDaniel What Does it Mean? *** (Crit welcomed) Nov 12 14, 15:03 
Larry Hi Daniel, long time no see!
First of all, yo... Nov 13 14, 12:56 JustDaniel Thank you for trying to understand my poor communi... Nov 15 14, 05:58 Larry What Larry Saw
What Larry saw… Daniel’s request
w... Nov 17 14, 18:27 JustDaniel What Larry saw was quite correct.
It's not cri... Nov 18 14, 19:58 Larry Hi Daniel,
I never said I didn't understand w... Nov 19 14, 00:05 JustDaniel Hey, Larry
YOUR communication was very clear to m... Nov 20 14, 10:03 Thoth Daniel
For me each poem must select its own form ... Nov 24 14, 07:01 
Psyche Oops, Daniel, I missed this one altogether. Far to... Feb 25 15, 23:52 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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