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 Egyptian  Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry  |
Chances taken in life expand our horizons, while avoiding risky ventures stagnates. © D R Harris - 23 February 2004 Note: I don't necessarily believe that chancey living is wise, but there have been times it worked out right for me. 
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Feb 25 04, 18:56
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
QUOTE(Cleo_Serapis @ Feb. 23 2004, 03:19) Hi Dolly! Another cool piece!  I'm thinking about the word 'hiding' - for some reason it sticks out? What about straying perhaps?  Hugs! ~Cleo :) Hi Lori, I pondered what you said and replaced "hiding" with "avoiding". What do you thnk? Does this work better? Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Hugs, Dolly |
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Athena Chances Feb 23 04, 06:01 
Cleo_Serapis Hi Dolly!
Another cool piece!
I'm thinking abo... Feb 23 04, 06:19 codger Wouldn't life be dull if we never took the odd... Feb 24 04, 10:10 blondie Hi there, Dolly!
I enjoyed your cinquain. ... Feb 24 04, 11:35 Athena QUOTE(codger @ Feb. 24 2004, 07:10)Wouldn... Feb 25 04, 18:58 Athena QUOTE(blondie @ Feb. 24 2004, 08:35)Hi there,... Feb 25 04, 19:05 Cleo_Serapis Hiya Dolly! :)
Melikes!!!!!
:pharoah2 Feb 25 04, 19:43 Athena Hey Lori! MELIKESTOO! Thanks f... Feb 26 04, 00:29 Siren Dolly,
So much said with few words.
Enjoyed
Da... Feb 26 04, 10:00 Zeus˛ Dolly,
so much said poignantly with so few words.
... Feb 26 04, 16:59 Athena QUOTE(Siren @ Feb. 26 2004, 07:00)Dolly,
So ... Mar 1 04, 05:03 
Athena QUOTE(Zeus˛ @ Feb. 26 2004, 13:59)Dolly,
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