Good Time Girl, Love and humor Options

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Good Time Girl

Brush of the wind steals
your name from my lips.
Where it was but a whisper
in a dream, a kiss, lighter
than butterfly footsteps.

Your voice was the murmur
of a rain drop from a leaf,
that rose to a waterfalls
thunderous roar.

It's song a susurration
of love, at first I was afraid
that you would not hear,
thought of disappointment,
when your hand on my shoulder
touched me and you said

"Hey sailor, looking for a good time?"

3 Nov 2010
© Steve Pray

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okvotes are 2 to 0 i will change the last stanza... thought about it when I first posted but wanted to see how many laughs came through...
Thanks Eira and Robin for reading. I couldn't get the last one to come out right and fought with it for an hour then took a nap, I need to get back to a lot of poems I have posted and just let lie without revision. My muse is sort of so so lately so maybe i cna wend my tired way over and revize a few....I also need to go find some of my really old ones from when I was on other sites, I think I may have misplaced them. Mind is fuzzy so's my face but you still take me walking all over the place....lol.I think I have lost a week in here if you find it please return.

Take care all
Steve